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GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

Hello   Scope community 

Please find another poem I have written below 

I hope you are well and safe?

The Unexpected Surprise poem 

I was born premature

I was at death’s door; doctors wanted to turn my life support machine off.

But my dad and mum fought to keep my life support machine on.

I fought with every breath and grew stronger each day

My family members prayed to god, who listened to their prayers 

I survived and I am so alive 

Which surprised the doctors 

Being born prematurely has affected my legs.

I could start feeling sorry for myself, but as I said to myself, “What is the point of doing that?” 

I have my brain and hands that still work 

I have achieved a lot of things in my life 

I still have other things I want to achieve 

Nothing is going to stop me from achieving 

I have a strong belief and confidence in my ability 

I have felt my poetry giving me strength and enabling me to put any bad times in my life behind me 

I think my poetry has given me a voice and I struggle to convey what I am sometimes failing to say through speaking 

Lockdown has allowed me to concentrate on my own poetry 

I like to write poetry throughout the day,

I am not letting being born premature obstruct my life 

I am determined to live my life to the full

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  • Adrian_ScopeAdrian_Scope Administrator Posts: 7,555 Scope community team
    That's a very powerful poem @Globster. Nice one. :smile:
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  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 10,652 Scope community team
    This is beautiful @Globster! As someone who as also born prematurely, it's a really powerful read and could relate. :) 

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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Hello  to Scope community 

    I am letting you know that I have sent this poem into to a poetry competition 
  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 10,652 Scope community team
    That's great @Globster! Best of luck!
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited May 29
    Thank you @Chloe_Scope  
    I appreciate you could you please help me because I created positive thoughts video about disability should not stop you from achieving your dreams 
    I would appreciate if you could help me share with the community 
  • AilsAils Community champion Posts: 2,268 Disability Gamechanger
    A wonderful and very moving poem, @Globster.  The best of luck with the poetry competition!  :smiley:
    Winner of the Scope New Volunteer Award 2019.   :)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    A young man called Jay. 

    He had to show his doubters wrong 

    This poetry has help him to covered many subjects 

    I hope to my poetry is helping the Scope community 

    Now I feel I have given hope and belief that you can achieve anything if just mind to it.


  • ross2503ross2503 Member Posts: 91 Pioneering
  • katho31katho31 Member - under moderation Posts: 701 Pioneering
    Amazing and powerful @Globster :)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    A young man called Ray

    He found his way to pay his bills. 

    As Ray found confidence in learning mathematics 

    Which helped Ray climb the ladder at work.

    As Ray has never shirked from hard work.

  • GrinchyGrinchy Member Posts: 245 Pioneering
    Nice poetry skills @Globster, good luck in the competition
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited July 25

                                                                       Love is a special moment

    A young man called Jay 

    He met a young woman called Priya

    As Priya  helped Jay get over his fear

    Jay and Priya shed a tear. 

    Jay and Priya held each other near.

    Jay loved the young woman called Priya so much.

    As Jay felt heart race at great peace as through girlfriend called Priya.

    Jay hoped to share some special memories with his girlfriend.

    Jay and Priya hoped to one day get married.


  • katho31katho31 Member - under moderation Posts: 701 Pioneering
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    Rhyming poem about my friend called Ed

    I had phoned my friend called Ed, 

    Who turned out to be ill, in bed,

    (with a bad head)

    He said he had drunk a whole keg, 

    (of beer). He feared

    that would lose his job, and not have bob,

    to his name.

    Ed was ashamed of his drinking, 

    and vowed to stop sinking, and thinking, about drinking





       
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem about a young women called Jen 
    A young women Jen never like to put her pencil down as she loved to sketch.
    She was able to sketch out images from her imagination 
    Jen was about to express her feelings and emotions through her drawings
    As Jen’s draws toured around the country’s art gallery and museums 
    Jen had won awards for her work as she didn’t worry from hard work as day and night Jen sketched
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited July 31
    My Summer poem

    The beautiful sun was shining and cool breeze blow by drawing back the white fluffy clouds to show a clear blue sky. As the birds were tweeting melodiously singing. I feel like writing more poetry when the sun is out. I drink a cold glass of lemonade with ice in the house because the seat electric wheelchair gets too hot in the sun outside. As dad and mum love pottering around in the garden. As they both love planting beautiful different coloured flowers in the garden 

    I would appreciate the community think about the new poem 


  • katho31katho31 Member - under moderation Posts: 701 Pioneering
    Just so beautiful  :)@Globster you have uplifted so many of us  :) and keep it up, you have an amazing talent and inspire us  :):)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    @katho31
    I also appreciate your kind words @katho31
    I appreciate the opportunity to share my talent with the scope community 
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited August 1
       Weather poem 
    I don’t not like winter as it makes my legs tight as the cold winter bites with a great might 
    As wear clothing to keep me warm during the winter months made  me feel depressed and I didn’t not feel like do anything with my life 
     The dark nights causes me fright
    The shine light from heart buns so bright 
    I know I can fall for from a great height if I become complacent while I am writing poetry writing 

  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 10,652 Scope community team
    Really great @Globster
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

       A poem for footballer called Harry Kane

    A footballer called Harry Kane. 

    Who trained rain or shine. 

    It's a great sign to see you are fine.

    Harry, you so kind. 


    I look forward to hearing community views on another poem I have written
     
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    Dream big 

    A woman called Christian

    She looked  beautiful and pristine and was very clean.

    Christian has geogoures beaming smile 

    Christian loved running a mile every morning.

    The temperature began to sore 

    As Christian could not  ignoring sweat that was pouring off her as she kept herself in trim condition 

    As she explored the possibility of running in time trials this gain qualification for the British athletic team as she esteemed to one day winning an Olympic gold medal one day.

    I would appreciate to hear the views of the scope community on my new poem I have just written 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited August 4
    A young woman called Rose.
    Loved pose in summer dresses as she was a fashion model. 
    It was far from easy to become a fashion model. 
    Rose know was a long and hard journey before she going to a big fashion model in the fashion industry. 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited August 6

     poem about born a premature baby

    A young man called Jay was born as a premature baby. 

    As doctors gave not hope

    But I learn to cope. 

    Nope, I feel  I have other people who were born prematurely hope that we can succeded 

    Scope stopped me from sliding down a slippery slope. 

    They gave hope that prover my doubters wrong. 

    As long as we believe that I could succeed. 

    As I have to get learn a way of getting rid of the to navigate thoughts and replace them with positive thoughts in my mind. 

    I would appreciate hearing what scope community think about my new poem



  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    Summer day at the beach poem 

    The sun shone brightly and the white flutey clouds and clear blue sky. As many children are many children swimming in the clear blue sparkling water.

    As there was an order notice,

    The proposed that many children could not swim in the sea at some time because of social distancing restrictions. 

    There were many children building a sandcastle with their buckets and spades. 

    As many children parading their sandcastles as children had a gleeful smile on their faces. parade

    I would appreciate receiving views from the community about a new poem
  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 10,652 Scope community team
    Oh I'd love to be at the beach right now!! Thank you for sharing this with us @Globster. :)
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    Hello to Scope community

    I am fantastic and well thank.

    How is everyone I hope you are all well and safe?

    I have just written this poem I appreciate to hear what to think about a poem  

    Poem for Ronnie O'Sullivan

    Ronnie, you are a snooker genius

    Occasions you play some amazing shots

    Now you are able to clear a snooker table really quick

    Now I really like your quick player

    I like to watch your matches on television 

    Especially I keep watching your 147 break in the 1997 World Championship

     


     Occasions I think your brain is like a computer Ronnie

    'So you play some mesmerising snooker

    Unbelievable safety play you have Ronnie

    Let me Thank you for bringing a smile to my face by watching playing snooker

    Let me show my appreciation for fantastic talent as a snooker player

    I have to say you are a true inspiration to many young people 

    Very fantastic to see some amazing long pots for you Ronnie

    And you sellouts auditoriums as people loving coming to watch you play

    Now I would like to thank you, Ronnie, for entertaining crowds in your covered career.

     



  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering

    Hello to Scope community 

    I hope you are well and safe 

       A   poem about a young man called Richard

    A young Richard loved drawing pictures

    Richard used his watercolours to paint some magnificent colour on his drawings

    Richard drawers were tour different art galleries across the UK.

    Richard’s drawings also won the award

    I would appreciate hearing what the community think about a new poem I have just written.  



  • Ross_ScopeRoss_Scope Administrator Posts: 870 Pioneering
    @Globster
    Another lovely poem :) 
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Hello Scope community 
    Please find a new poem just written
    There was a woman called Ross 
    Who choose to forget about her lowes. 
    Rose chooses to barniena dancers as nimble on her 
    As Rose had crowds on the edge of seats 
    As  barniena danced around the stage
    The crowd were left in amazement as the cheered and clapped the end of Rose barniena dance performance 
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Hello to Scope Community 
    Please find another poem
    A poem young woman called Ann
    There was a young woman called Ann.
    Who had a plan?
    Ann knew she could succeed if she believes and esteems to achieve dreams.
    As Ann has determination and delectation to succeded 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    edited October 16
    The poem called changing my for positive
    A young man called Chan
    He missed his nan
    Which helped Chan to change his life for the positive 
    Chan found a career in running   
    Which helped Chan get in stunning shape
    Now he head was in a good space. 
    He put his first gold medal never his granma photo called Mrs Surinder
    As Chan found miss right during one of his races 
    As the young woman was Tatleen. 
    As she was also a runner which he met her during running competition
     
     

  • Ross_ScopeRoss_Scope Administrator Posts: 870 Pioneering
    More well written and inspiring poems @Globster, thank you so much for sharing as always :) 
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Knife crime poem 
    How many inersent  young lives are lost to knife crime 
    Isn’t it time with we stop the blood shedding and the pain and distress caused to many families and tears of upset 

    It time we educate our young people that it is not cool to carry knives with you because knives can cause you more trouble and change the young person for ever and they face time behind bars if they kill someone with the knife and can face 
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem called little Archie wh
    There was a young women called Kate was in a state because she was late for work
    Kate was late for work became she was up for most of the night with her son called Archie who had a high fever and temperature and was not able to sleep as he cried and had tears  rolling  down his  face. She gave him some cowpol to help reduce his temperature and fever as his dad called Rob worked from home as baker
    As Rob and Achie baked some beautiful chocolate chip cookies and fairly cakes as Archie began to feel a lot better and his high temperature and fever had come down and he was full of energy again 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    A poem about young man called Jay
    A young man called Jay never straide to far from his poetry writing 
    Because he was able to string words together beautifully 
    He felt his focus and ambitions to achieve with his poetry 
  • chiariedschiarieds Community champion Posts: 4,836 Disability Gamechanger
    I really liked this last poem @Globster - poetry shouldn't just be about verses that rhyme, & this last one, I feel, is more about yourself, & says a lot in a few well chosen words. :)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem called never stop me achieving 
    A young man called Jay, loves to write his poetry 
    His poetry writing has become none stop 
    As grows like a crops. 
    As he hopes to get to the top 
    As won’t stop till get top.


  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem about making small to achieving my big dream
    A young man called Jay 
    He  found a way to stay positive  
    As poetry writing opened door to many different opportunities. 
    As he keeps making slow steps to achieving his dreams.
       
  • Cher_ScopeCher_Scope Administrator Posts: 1,435 Pioneering
    @Globster Your poems brighten all of our days too, thank you for sharing them with us :)
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem about Richard artwork 
    There was young man Richard 
    Who going pitching a idea to dragon den
    But then computer went wrong 
    But it long till Richard computer back on song
    Richard blow the dragons away with his amazing artwork 
    Richard was given financial support by the Dragons 
    As Richard artwork sold worldwide 
    As he was a true inspiration to other people with a disability that were left feeling scared about starting a new venture in whatever can scary to stay. 
    Richard motivated others to not be scared to try something and fail the first few times but he eventually said you will succeed 
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 444 Pioneering
    Poem about Adrian the world boxing championship 
    There was a young man called Adrian 
    He had a passion for boxing 
    In Adrian first few months of boxing had the tough lesson of being knocked out in few fights 
    But then Adrian found a boxing coach called Steve 
    Who showed Adrian how to defend if his opponent raining body shot and how protect his chin
    As a few months of training with Jon you could see that Adrian had taken the advice from John which made better decisions about when the right time is attack his boxing opponent. 
    Adrian made a rapid move up the boxing world 
    As he was soon fighting for the world boxing championship at Maddison square gardens in front of his family who had dreamt about this moment and Adrian did not disappoint as he knocked out his opponent who fell on the canvas as the referee started his count
    Adrian opponent tried to get back to his feet but he was unable to carry on 
    This means Adrian was world boxing champion 
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