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another poem

GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

Hello   Scope community 

Please find another poem I have written below 

I hope you are well and safe?

The Unexpected Surprise poem 

I was born premature

I was at death’s door; doctors wanted to turn my life support machine off.

But my dad and mum fought to keep my life support machine on.

I fought with every breath and grew stronger each day

My family members prayed to god, who listened to their prayers 

I survived and I am so alive 

Which surprised the doctors 

Being born prematurely has affected my legs.

I could start feeling sorry for myself, but as I said to myself, “What is the point of doing that?” 

I have my brain and hands that still work 

I have achieved a lot of things in my life 

I still have other things I want to achieve 

Nothing is going to stop me from achieving 

I have a strong belief and confidence in my ability 

I have felt my poetry giving me strength and enabling me to put any bad times in my life behind me 

I think my poetry has given me a voice and I struggle to convey what I am sometimes failing to say through speaking 

Lockdown has allowed me to concentrate on my own poetry 

I like to write poetry throughout the day,

I am not letting being born premature obstruct my life 

I am determined to live my life to the full

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  • Adrian_ScopeAdrian_Scope Administrator Posts: 7,407 Scope community team
    That's a very powerful poem @Globster. Nice one. :smile:
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  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 9,519 Scope community team
    This is beautiful @Globster! As someone who as also born prematurely, it's a really powerful read and could relate. :) 

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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    Hello  to Scope community 

    I am letting you know that I have sent this poem into to a poetry competition 
  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 9,519 Scope community team
    That's great @Globster! Best of luck!
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  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited May 29
    Thank you @Chloe_Scope  
    I appreciate you could you please help me because I created positive thoughts video about disability should not stop you from achieving your dreams 
    I would appreciate if you could help me share with the community 
  • AilsAils Community champion Posts: 2,268 Disability Gamechanger
    A wonderful and very moving poem, @Globster.  The best of luck with the poetry competition!  :smiley:
    Winner of the Scope New Volunteer Award 2019.   :)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

    A young man called Jay. 

    He had to show his doubters wrong 

    This poetry has help him to covered many subjects 

    I hope to my poetry is helping the Scope community 

    Now I feel I have given hope and belief that you can achieve anything if just mind to it.


  • ross2503ross2503 Member Posts: 91 Pioneering
  • katho31katho31 Member Posts: 699 Pioneering
    Amazing and powerful @Globster :)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

    A young man called Ray

    He found his way to pay his bills. 

    As Ray found confidence in learning mathematics 

    Which helped Ray climb the ladder at work.

    As Ray has never shirked from hard work.

  • GrinchyGrinchy Member Posts: 148 Pioneering
    Nice poetry skills @Globster, good luck in the competition
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited July 25

                                                                       Love is a special moment

    A young man called Jay 

    He met a young woman called Priya

    As Priya  helped Jay get over his fear

    Jay and Priya shed a tear. 

    Jay and Priya held each other near.

    Jay loved the young woman called Priya so much.

    As Jay felt heart race at great peace as through girlfriend called Priya.

    Jay hoped to share some special memories with his girlfriend.

    Jay and Priya hoped to one day get married.


  • katho31katho31 Member Posts: 699 Pioneering
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

    Rhyming poem about my friend called Ed

    I had phoned my friend called Ed, 

    Who turned out to be ill, in bed,

    (with a bad head)

    He said he had drunk a whole keg, 

    (of beer). He feared

    that would lose his job, and not have bob,

    to his name.

    Ed was ashamed of his drinking, 

    and vowed to stop sinking, and thinking, about drinking





       
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    Poem about a young women called Jen 
    A young women Jen never like to put her pencil down as she loved to sketch.
    She was able to sketch out images from her imagination 
    Jen was about to express her feelings and emotions through her drawings
    As Jen’s draws toured around the country’s art gallery and museums 
    Jen had won awards for her work as she didn’t worry from hard work as day and night Jen sketched
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited July 31
    My Summer poem

    The beautiful sun was shining and cool breeze blow by drawing back the white fluffy clouds to show a clear blue sky. As the birds were tweeting melodiously singing. I feel like writing more poetry when the sun is out. I drink a cold glass of lemonade with ice in the house because the seat electric wheelchair gets too hot in the sun outside. As dad and mum love pottering around in the garden. As they both love planting beautiful different coloured flowers in the garden 

    I would appreciate the community think about the new poem 


  • katho31katho31 Member Posts: 699 Pioneering
    Just so beautiful  :)@Globster you have uplifted so many of us  :) and keep it up, you have an amazing talent and inspire us  :):)
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    @katho31
    I also appreciate your kind words @katho31
    I appreciate the opportunity to share my talent with the scope community 
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited August 1
       Weather poem 
    I don’t not like winter as it makes my legs tight as the cold winter bites with a great might 
    As wear clothing to keep me warm during the winter months made  me feel depressed and I didn’t not feel like do anything with my life 
     The dark nights causes me fright
    The shine light from heart buns so bright 
    I know I can fall for from a great height if I become complacent while I am writing poetry writing 

  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 9,519 Scope community team
    Really great @Globster
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    Scope
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

       A poem for footballer called Harry Kane

    A footballer called Harry Kane. 

    Who trained rain or shine. 

    It's a great sign to see you are fine.

    Harry, you so kind. 


    I look forward to hearing community views on another poem I have written
     
  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

    Dream big 

    A woman called Christian

    She looked  beautiful and pristine and was very clean.

    Christian has geogoures beaming smile 

    Christian loved running a mile every morning.

    The temperature began to sore 

    As Christian could not  ignoring sweat that was pouring off her as she kept herself in trim condition 

    As she explored the possibility of running in time trials this gain qualification for the British athletic team as she esteemed to one day winning an Olympic gold medal one day.

    I would appreciate to hear the views of the scope community on my new poem I have just written 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited August 4
    A young woman called Rose.
    Loved pose in summer dresses as she was a fashion model. 
    It was far from easy to become a fashion model. 
    Rose know was a long and hard journey before she going to a big fashion model in the fashion industry. 

  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering
    edited August 6

     poem about born a premature baby

    A young man called Jay was born as a premature baby. 

    As doctors gave not hope

    But I learn to cope. 

    Nope, I feel  I have other people who were born prematurely hope that we can succeded 

    Scope stopped me from sliding down a slippery slope. 

    They gave hope that prover my doubters wrong. 

    As long as we believe that I could succeed. 

    As I have to get learn a way of getting rid of the to navigate thoughts and replace them with positive thoughts in my mind. 

    I would appreciate hearing what scope community think about my new poem



  • GlobsterGlobster Member Posts: 243 Pioneering

    Summer day at the beach poem 

    The sun shone brightly and the white flutey clouds and clear blue sky. As many children are many children swimming in the clear blue sparkling water.

    As there was an order notice,

    The proposed that many children could not swim in the sea at some time because of social distancing restrictions. 

    There were many children building a sandcastle with their buckets and spades. 

    As many children parading their sandcastles as children had a gleeful smile on their faces. parade

    I would appreciate receiving views from the community about a new poem
  • Chloe_ScopeChloe_Scope Administrator Posts: 9,519 Scope community team
    Oh I'd love to be at the beach right now!! Thank you for sharing this with us @Globster. :)
    Community Partner
    Scope
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